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The Day the
Earth Stood Still II
Revised Treatment
by
Ray Bradbury
11 September 1981
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This is the revised
treatment for a film written by Ray Bradbury in September,1981. This draft, although
commisioned by the studio, was never filmed. The treatment is 64 pages in length. This first appeared on Dreamerwww.com. The site is currently down. When that site comes back up, I will redirect this back to the site that did all the work. |
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"The Day the Earth Stood Still II"
Revised
Treatment
by
RAY BRADBURY
11
September 1981 |
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"The Day the Earth Stood Still II"
Revised Treatment by Ray Bradbury
11 September 1981
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Stars and our World in
Space.
Down out of the stars
comes a burning object, not quite clear as yet.
It races across the
world, even as the shadow of night moves across the earth's surface.
Below, in various
cities of the world, we see that it is Christmas.
The children of Japan
look up as: The bright star moves over in the twilight.
CUT TO:
India. The children of
India stare up as: The burning object flies above.
CUT TO:
Moscow. Where children
and their parents, coming from church, look up, startled.
CUT TO:
Jerusalem, where Jew,
Christian, and Moslem children run out, point up, watch as: The meteor-like fire runs
across the stars.
In Paris, the same
story, as sunset arrives, bringing the star. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
2. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 The children of Paris,
The children, suddenly, of London, look up. The star burns away across the Atlantic,
following the sun, keeping up with the rim of night, as Christmas Eve shadows across the
seas and lands:
CUT TO:
Cape Canaveral! Twilight
here, also. The Star has not as yet arrived.
Far off we can hear carols being sung...Christmas lights at a distance, faint laughter.
The CAMERA prowls over the landscape. We see the largest building in the world,
silhouetted against the setting sun... the Vehicle Assembly Building where the Apollo
rockets were fitted together and sent out to the launch-pads to go to the Moon.
The CAMERA peers briefly into the cathedral interior of the VAB where, perhaps, in a far
alcove we see that someone has set up a small Christmas tree, lit. Somewhere a radio is
playing, a mere whisper of some carol or other. The giant hangar is empty. It is obvious
that almost everyone has gone home early for the holiday.
The CAMERA prowls inside for a moment, and we may well see, standing tall, in the shadows,
the titanic ghost shapes of Apollo rockets, motionless and waiting. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
3. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 The CAMERA moves out into sunset dune territory, scans
the various gantries which are deserted. The wind blows dust over the lone machineries.
The CAMERA finds and reads, quickly, a sign which says: ABANDON IN PLACE, No
Further Activity Authorized. Perhaps we can hear an echo of the old sounds,
voices counting down, the merest murmur of machineries, radios, computers.
THE VOICES
Oxygen check.....hydrogen
check.....ten minutes to launch.....etc., etc.....
The sounds rise and fall
in the sound of surf from the nearby sea. The CAMERA moves up, up, up along an Apollo
gantry.
A VOICE
...seven...six...five...four...
three...two...one...we have ignition!
There might be a mighty
blast, but instead an explosion of -- wings'
Birds fly up from the
dunes in a great bang of flying!
Click, click, click,
click, a MAN with a camera rises up to photograph this ascension.
The birds wheel and fly off.
The MAN continues to photograph them in the sunset light. Then he stops, checks his
camera, looks around, moves off. The CAMERA follows him along the dunes, past the
abandoned gantry where only the wind sounds now. He blinks up at the vast metal
machineries as he passes, his face full of remembrance. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
4. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 A car goes along the road a hundred yards off, a
Christmas tree tied to its top. Voices sing, raggedly: "Me wish you a Merry
Christmas, we wish you a Merry Christmas...."
The MAN snaps a picture
of the sign: ABANDON IN PLACE. He reads the sign, quietly, shakes his head. Surf pounds
the shore!
He backs into view, near
a road, closer to the Vehicle Assembly Building, snapping his camera, when:
Whoom! a car almost gets
him.
The car stops. A MAN
calls to him.
THE MAN
Hey, Atkins, what you
tryin'
to do, get killed for Christmas?
ATKINS peers in, shakes
hands. The MAN has a car full of laughing singing kids.
ATKINS
Carl! Hey--great!
THE MAN
I thought you were with
NASA in Washington?
ATKINS
(nods)
They sent me down to
photograph:
Christmas at Canaveral!
THE MAN
What Canaveral? Where?
(snorts, laughs
Ah, well -- there's plenty
of
Christmas! Right, kids!?
Make it Merry!
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
5. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 The car drives off, the children laughing, singing.
Leaving ATKINS to murmur to himself, waving at them:
ATKINS
Merry....
Then, something jerks his
gaze. He glances at the sky. A star is there, very bright, on the horizon.
ATKINS
Venus? No. Wrong place -- it ---
The star moves. It rushes
down, becomes a saucer shape.
And as ATKINS watches:
The saucer hurtles toward
the Vehicle Assembly Building.
ATKINS gasps, because:
The VAB doors are
thundering wide, as if signaled to receive this visitor!
The craft flies down! And
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Flies right through the
vast gates of the Vehicle Assembly Building to vanish inside!!!
Stunned, ATKINS watches
as:
In the cathedral
interior, the spacecraft hovers, sinks, sets down.
Even as the great gates
thunder to shut in the craft!
ATKINS leaps through as:
the gates slam.
The craft glows in the
dark.
ATKINS circles, staring
at it. He whispers to himself:
ATKINS
Wait! I know this! |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
6. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 He moves around the vast craft, memory shadowing his
face.
ATKINS
Thirty years ago. Yes!
A sound startles him. A
nearby elevator hums and drifts up in the strutworks, a shadow inside it.
He runs, stops, stares
up: as the elevator slides into the shadowly heights.
ATKINS stares from the
elevator to the spacecraft, then jumps, runs, punches a second elevator button. The second
elevator slams its door wide, he leaps in, goes up.
On the way into the dark
mountainslopes of machinery, he stares up at -- That other elevator, carrying its alien
cargo up and on up into yet darker cathedral heights.
It reaches the top of the
Vehicle Assembly Building a good ten seconds ahead of him. Distantly, we see and hear its
door clang wide, and a shadow move.
Reaching the top, ATKINS
runs by the other elevator, checking it. He glances up and around at further staircases.
He emerges on the roof of
the VAB as the last light of day fades.
He looks around at
emptiness. The wind mourns up here, as lonely as the wind out in the dunes among the
abandoned rocket pads.
A sound jerks him about.
It is the other elevator
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
7. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 400 feet below. Both elevators, in fact! He has been
tricked. Obviously, someone has pushed the button on the second one and leaped out to let
it go down by itself. Cursing, ATKINS races to a third bank of elevators, and has to wait,
while, far below, the other two elevators reach their destination.
Sliding down out of the
darkness, he emerges and looks around at silence and shadows. Whoever led him up to trap
him on the roof, was gaining time. They have had a full minute or more to vanish. They are
indeed gone.
A VOICE
Hey!
A building ATTENDANT
stares down from a catwalk above. The spacecraft glows and hums, with the small Christmas
tree nearby.
The ATTENDANT, stunned,
says:
THE
ATTENDANT
Who put that gift under my tree?
CUT TO
DARKNESS.
A slam of brakes. A car
arrives outside.
ATKINS is waiting for
this arrival outside in the blowing night.
The arrival is the VAB
DIRECTOR, who glares at ATKINS.
DIRECTOR
You've been drinking, of course?! |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
8. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 He looks into ATKINS' face, sniffs, shakes his head.
DIRECTOR
No. Damn. Now, who shut
those doors?
He is glaring at the vast
doors now.
ATKINS
I wish I knew.
The DIRECTOR.opens the
small door in the great gate, steps through. And stops, shocked as:
We see what he sees: the
spacecraft, a light unto itself, filling the great church-like interior.
DIRECTOR
(to ATKINS)
You just got your job back.
ATKINS
I didn't know I was fired.
More officials arrive to
confer. For now, only a few people know of the alien spaceship's landing...ATKINS, plus
the ATTENDANT, plus the handful of Canaveral people gathered here.
The question is asked:
why did the craft land here, this place, at this hour?
CHRIS ATKINS almost
responds. A shadow crosses his face. He has half-remembered something about the visiting
ship. But he remains silent.
The great VAB doors are
locked, the various officials warned. For now, no one beyond the Base must know of this
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
9. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 Someone aboard the craft came out, vanished -- where?
ATKINS at last speaks up:
ATKINS
Maybe we won't search.
Maybe we wait for it to find us?
DIRECTOR
And why should it do that?
ATKINS
It knows one of us.
DIRECTOR
Who?
ATKINS
Me. I think. My family.
Years ago. Maybe they didn't know I was here. Missed me. Come looking for me now. I've got
to follow.
DIRECTOR.
Sorry. I've heard stuff
like that from photographers for years. You'll do anything for a story.
ATKINS
You must let me go!
He looks about,
frustrated, then moves toward the ship.
DIRECTOR
Now, hold on --
ATKINS, confronting the
ship, whispers.
DIRECTOR
--what?
ATKINS whispers again. We
cannot hear what he says. We hear only a murmur, but --
The ship hums, whines,
pulses, glows!
The officials, startled,
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
10. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 As the elevators, a11 of them, hum, racing up their
separate shafts, empty!
The spacecraft pulses
louder.
And the great doors of
the Vehicle Assembly Building thunder wide.
The officials stare from
the doors, to the spacecraft, to ATKINS.
ATKINS
It wants me to go.
The DIRECTOR, stunned,
can only agree.
DIRECTOR
It most certainly does.
ATKINS hurries outside.
ATKINS
You'll hear in one hour!
The doors slam shut on
the shocked Canaveral staff.
As the doors BANG, a Jeep
drives up, ATKINS' friend and co-photographer assistant, BARNEY, at the wheel.
BARNEY
Hey, did I miss something?
ATKINS
Not much. Tell you on the
way.
(gets in
Jeep)
Barney? If you were a
visitor from a strange world --
BARNEY
I am! Los Angeles!
ATKINS
--just arrived here. What
would you do first?
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
11. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 BARNEY
(joking)
Check in the nearest hotel?
ATKINS
Barney! I love you. Of
course, the nearest! Our hotel!
The Jeep roars away.
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At the hotel, busy,
People coming, going, Christmas.
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The REGISTRAR,
REGISTRAR
Yes, Mr. Atkins?
ATKINS
You know me, I'm here
four times a year from Washington. Could I see your registrations?
A long pause. The
REGISTRAR scowls, ATKINS prompts him;
ATKINS
Official business...?
The REGISTRAR hands it
over. BARNEY arrives.
BARNEY
Hey, have the marines landed?
ATKINS
No, but...Williams,
Harkins, Field, Webster, Shane, Robinson, Weiner, Nagidson... no...wait...
BARNEY
What?
ATKINS
There. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
12. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 BARNEY leans over ATKINS' shoulder, peering at the names.
BARNEY
How do you pronounce that?
ATKINS
(softly)
Klaatu barada nikto.
BARNEY can only blink at
him, waiting.
ATKINS
(almost to himself,
murmuring)
Oh, my God....yes...a
long time ago.
BARNEY
Man? Woman?
ATKINS
I don't know.
BARNEY
(snorts)
Don't know!?
ATKINS
Barada nikto!
(slams registration shut)
0 Lord! Room 212!
Upstairs, he taps at 212.
No answer. Under the door he sees a strange light, hears stranger electronic sounds. He
goes back to BARNEY, who has gathered their equipment for the return to the Cape.
A party is in full flood,
trimming a Christmas tree to one side of the lobby.
Friends call to ATKINS as
he scans all the faces coming and going, looking for the Stranger from another world; man,
woman, what? |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
13. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 A FRIEND
Hey, Atkins, old bean. Join!
ANOTHER
Have a drink!
ANOTHER
Have a bauble.
ATKINS takes the
champagne, the bauble. C1imbs one step up a small step-ladder, hangs it.
BARNEY
Here's another, chum!
ATKINS
No, thanks --
ATKINS turns, ready to
leave, when he looks down at:
The most incredibly
beautiful crystal Christmas bauble ever seen. It glows and shines with an inner light, an
inner sound, an inner music.
The light shines over his
eyes, his cheeks, his face, warning and enchanting him to wonder. He looks from it:
To the delicate hand
holding it, and the CAMERA moves down the long delicate arm to the person, the woman, who
has handed him this incredible gift.
Faint music breathes from
the crystal orb he holds in his hand.
stares up at him across
light years of time.
VOICES
(in b.g.)
Boy! That has to
be the Star of Bethlehem! On top! Put it on top!
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
14. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS, transfixed by the beauty of the woman, cannot
move.
At last he does, turns, reaches up,
Places the star, the crystal, the light, the music, high.
Turns, looks down, The crowd had closed around her like a tide.
She is gone!
Riven, he leaps down,
ATKINS
Barney, did you see?!
BARNEY points to the
lobby door, Which has just swung shut!
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Their car on the road,
pulling into the Cape, In the car, BARNEY protests,
BARNEY
How you know she's coming
back here?
ATKINS
We're in touch now. It has
to be near the ship!
Outside the Vehicle
Assembly Building, the first reporters have arrived. Word has leaked out. The newsmen are
incensed at not being filled in; for that matter, being locked out. ATKINS is permitted
in, but BARNEY is kept out with the other reporters.
Inside, ATKINS stares at
the enigmatic ship. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
15. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS
(to himself)
I wonder, is she there?
AN OFFICER
What?
ATKINS
(corrects himself)
Has--anyone tried to open -- that?
ANOTHER
You're kidding. There's no
way in!
ATKINS
Let me try.
FIRST
OFFICER
See here --
SECOND
OFFICER
Let him.
ATKINS moves up to 'the
ship, watches it carefully, and then says the words, quietly:
ATKINS
Klaatu
barada
nikto.
Nothing happens.
The men behind snort and
shake their heads.
VOICES
All right, Atkins... you...
Impulsively, he repeats
the words.
ATKINS
Klaatu... barada...nikto!
The ship hums, vibrates.
A seam appears where the door might manifest itself in the skin of the ship.
The men gasp. ATKINS
waits.
But there is no further
manifestation. The ship will not breech itself just yet. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
16. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS' face lights with a thought which has just struck
him.
ATKINS
Of course. Fool. It's not
Christmas Morning!
AN
OFFICIAL
What?
ATKINS nods at the ship.
ATKINS
We open our Gift, then.
He turns to exit.
ATKINS
I'll check it out now.
Let you know.
He exits. The night is
blowing with a wind that dies as he moves across from the VAB toward the dunes, where he
thinks he has seen something.
Out on the dunes, waiting
for him, looking at the gantries, and the huge building where her spacecraft lies quietly
waiting, is the YOUNG WOMAN from the hotel, the YOUNG WOMAN who handed him the incredibly
bright crystal that he placed upon the tree.
He stands looking at her
in profile. She is dressed in slacks and a trim jacket with a scarf. Her hair blows
in the wind. It is a good
clean profile that he sees, with a touch of luminous inner knowledge in the cheeks, in the
brow, in the eyes. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
17. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 She is not startled when he arrives, nor, for a long
while does she look at him. Then, very quietly, listening to far radio voices and musics
that drift by in the night, Christmas carols coming and going, she says:
YOUNG
WOMAN
In a few minutes, it's
your Christmas.
He catches the way she
has phrased it. And instead of saying hello, introducing himself, he continues as if they
were picking up a conversation dropped only a moment ago:
ATKINS
Not yours?
The YOUNG WOMAN looks
around at the sea and the land.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Not mine.
This quickens him. She is
admitting throngs, half sensed, She is looking around at the dunes now, and the ruins of
the old space pads.
ATKINS
Do you like our world?
The YOUNG WOMAN looks,
thinks, responds.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Some of it.
Her eyes are fixed to the
rusting machines now. He looks with her.
ATKINS
All of this was -- great -- once. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
18. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 She nods and muses on this truth.
YOUNG
WOMAN
I know. What a shame.
What a waste.
ATKINS defends the land,
the ruins.
ATKINS
It'll be great again some
day. We'll rebuild.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Will you...?
She looks at him for the
first time. It is an incredible face. The eyes take him down to the bone.
He almost backs off, she
is examining him so clearly, so easily, so completely.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Will I even be
here? For that matter -- will you?
Again the clear gaze.
Again, he almost pulls
back. There is no threat in her voice, but he is vaguely uneasy.
ATKINS
Unless something happens.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Ah! Things do happen,
don't they?
ATKINS
I'm not leaving, till I
change all this.
They look at Canaveral,
the night, the sea.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Then, you're in charge here? |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
19. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 He gazes into her face.
ATKINS
You know I'm not.
YOUNG
WOMAN
(after a beat)
That could change.
He senses that she might
very well be the one to change it.
ATKINS
I lie in bed nights,
wishing I ran the world!
YOUNG
WOMAN
What would you do if
someone gave it to you?
ATKINS
I'd clean it all up!
YOUNG
WOMAN
Or destroy it...
ATKINS
Yes. If I wasn't careful.
Far away there are sounds
of celebration. A clock strikes midnight.
She turns to look and
listen.
The wind blows over the
dunes.
YOUNG
WOMAN
There. It's midnight.
ATKINS
Time for a Second Annunciation?
She knows what he is
speaking about. The knowledge of the Biblical Annunciation is in her glowing face as she
turns back to him.
YOUNG
WOMAN
What would you like to
have announced?
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
20. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS looks from her to the world far across the land,
past the silent gantries.
ATKINS
That this Christmas morn,
we get the grandest gift that man ever got. That something incredible and wonderful is
about to happen, that will change us forever and be only for the good!
She is taken and pleased
with her possible friend and pupil.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Miracles do happen, you
know.
Repentance is possible.
The response can be mercy.
The result can be salvation.
ATKINS
For me? For all of us?
YOUNG
WOMAN
You first. You wi11 be
visited by three Ghosts.
ATKINS
My God. You know Dickens!
"The Christmas Carol."
She nods.
ATKINS
Am I Scrooge, then?
YOUNG
WOMAN
No, but perhaps there are
millions like him, nearby.
ATKINS
(looks around)
When do I meet the First Ghost?
She looks off at the VAB,
and the ship hidden within, as if asking it the answer. |
"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
21. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 YOUNG WOMAN
(a beat, then)
I will tell you, during
the
night.
The wind rises, bringing
with it far voices, bells, exclamations, laughter, the tolling of clocks,
Both turn to look around
at the Cape, the sky, the far town, the Christmas lights,
ATKINS
It's --
YOUNG
WOMAN
Yes. It's midnight. Time for --
She touches her wrist
which is encircled with a silver band with miniaturized computer tabs engraved on it, And
the lights on the far gantries spring on. They are like immense Christmas trees in the
night.
ATKINS stares, stunned
and incredulous.
The gantries blaze. The
music of the world rises fitfully on the wind.
She steps and takes his
face in her hands and kisses him very quietly on the brow. He is immensely moved by all of
this.
ATKINS
Merry Christmas...
YOUNG
WOMAN
(nods)
I wish you well.
She touches his eyelids
with two fingers.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Stay there. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
22. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 His eyes are shut. He cannot open them. He hears her
moving away.
ATKINS
Wait!
From the darkness we see
her shape pause, we hear her voice.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Yes?
ATKINS
Your name!?
She responds, further
off, turning to send her voice back in the night wind.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Klaata.
He quickens, startled,
feverish, eyes shut.
ATKINS
Klaatu!?
YOUNG
WOMAN'S VOICE
No!
We see her silhouette,
further off.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Klaata. Klaatu's daughter.
She is gone. The dunes
are empty. He opens his eyes.
ATKINS
(whispers)
Klaata --- |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
23. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 He looks down at:
Her footprints in the
sand, which, in a sudden gust of wind, blow away, are erased, gone!
The Christmas-lit
gantries, all along the Cape, go out, one by one!
He stands in the
darkness, riven, as we
FADE TO
BLACK.
Inside the VAB, the
officials are sitting or standing in a half circle around the spacecraft.
ATKINS looms up behind
them suddenly, stares at the ship for a long moment, then says, quietly:
ATKINS
Get some sleep. Christmas
morning - I go in the ship.
He turns and moves off
into the shadows. A door shuts.
At the hotel, there is
quietness, shadows.
On the top of the tree
which is still lit, is the incredible crystal bauble placed there hours before by ATKINS.
An ATTENDANT is shutting
the tree lights off as ATKINS arrives.
The lights blink into
darkness.
The ATTENDANT and ATKINS
stand looking up at:
That amazing crystalline
illumination brought as beauty from a far place.
ATTENDANT
Hey... what's that connected to? |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
24. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS softly responds.
ATKINS
You may well ask,
son... you may well ask.
He reaches up, removes
the bauble, to which the ATTENDANT objects.
ATKINS
It goes back on the
tree...
at dawn.
ATKINS goes up to bed.
In the middle of the
night, the bauble, which he has placed on the second pillow on the empty side of the bed,
pulses with dim light, half-musical sounds.
ATKINS opens his eyes,
and looks at:
The crystal, which burns
and lowers its serene light.
ATKINS speaks to the
light.
ATKINS
Are you here?
KLAATA's voice whispers
back:
KLAATA'S
VOICE
...yes....
ATKINS reponds.
ATKINS
And somewhere else, at
the same time.
KLAATAS
VOICE
(softly)
Near, yes. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
25. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS watches the growing, fading light,
ATKINS
When do I see you again?
The crystal responds,
KLAATA'S
VOICE
...after you have seen
the
First Ghost.
ATKINS remembers the old
Dickens tale.
ATKINS
Christmas Past?
The crystal murmurs and
illuminates itself with response:
KLAATA'S
VOICE
When the sun rises.
He nods, knowing what to
do.
ATKINS
Are...are you the Ghost
of
Christmas Present?
And the crystal replies,
quietly:
KLAATA'S
VOICE
Perhaps. If you deserve me,
ATKINS
And the Ghost of Christmas Future?
The crystal almost
darkens, then burns with a firefly light,
KLAATA'S
VOICE
(far away)
Perhaps there will be
none.
Maybe... there is no future.
ATKINS
(quietly, impulsively)
Klaata!
KLAATA'S
VOICE
Sleep! |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
26. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS
I --
KLAATA'S
VOICE
Sleep...!
His eyes stare and close.
Her voice fades as he goes into slumber.
KLAATA'S
VOICE
.....sss.....ssleeeep.......
The light dulls and he is
asleep and we
FADE OUT
TO:
Morning. Just before
sunrise. The Cape. The Vehicle Assembly Building washed with the first cold colors of
approaching dawn.
ATKINS is out on the
dunes, his camera busy.
He finds something, looks
down.
At the remnants of
KLAATA's footprints, going off on their own path in the sand, from the last night.
He takes a picture of
them, then turns to scan:
The empty gantries.
As the sun rises.
He turns to walk toward
the VAB.
Inside, all is silence.
The people have taken ATKINS at his word. Several guards lie asleep on their strewn mats,
around the ship. The NASA OFFICIAL drowses, half-asleep, over a game of solitaire laid out
on a cardtable nearby. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
27. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS stands by the ship. His lips move. We cannot hear
what he says. But we know the words from the way his mouth forms them, in pantomime.
The seam of the ship's
portal splits, opens, with a soft humming and a grand illumination.
The NASA OFFICIAL opens
his eyes, quickly, blinks, starts.
ATKINS
Shh!
His finger to his lips,
warning silence, ATKINS walks up, into the ship, which seals itself shut!
Circling in through the
geometrically illuminated corridors, ATKINS arrives at the heart of the ship, where:
A crystalline oblong
shape, a seven foot long object, glows in the center of a room. Inside the receptacle, or
bright 'coffin' if you wish to use the word, suspended in light and shadow, lies a body on
display.
At ATKINS' approach, the
long oblong crystal pulses with somewhat brighter color.
ATKINS, above it, looks
down, and is incredulous.
ATKINS
My God...! You are the
Ghost of Christmas Past!
A voice from within the
oblong responds, quietly.
THE VOICE
...yes... a summer,
anyway....
long gone...
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
28. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS whispers.
ATKINS
I know you.
THE VOICE
..yes
..
ATKINS
We met when I was a boy!
THE VOICE
We did.....
ATKINS speaks the name at
last.
ATKINS
Klaatu!
Now, close up, we see the
serene and sleeping face of the man within the crystal.
THE VOICE
The same....
ATKINS cannot resist
questioning.
ATKINS
Are you.....?
KLAATU anticipates the
full question and replies, quietly, from his half-sleep.
KLAATUS
VOICE
Alive and
dead?
A bit of both..
ATKINS is bewildered. The
light and shadows motion over his face.
KLAATUS
VOICE
When I left your somewhat
damaged world, 30 years ago, I was somewhat damaged, myself.
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
29. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS
They didn't---
KLAATU'S
VOICE
--understand? Yes. So
now, by this means, I am sustained, I do return. How much longer will I live? Now knowing,
let us speak quickly. What have you all been up to, the past 30 years?
ATKINS
The usual --
The light flickers. We
watch the serene face under the crystal barrier.
KLAATU'S
VOICE
Ah, that's bad.
ATKINS
Some of it's good.
KLAATU'S
VOICE
I know. Yes. But I want a
complete recitation. The Universe is the Great School. You are the new students.
ATKINS
Will you grade us?
KLAATU'S
VOICE
We are teachers, yes,
but only to a point. After that--
ATKINS remembers
something from the Past.
ATKINS
Our executioners...?
The light plays over
KLAATU's face. We move in close on his silent mouth. His voice speaks from within his
mind.
KLAATU'S
VOICE
...we promised
destruction, yes. But--
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
30. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS
Now you've changed your mind?
KLAATUS
VOICE
Perhaps we come only to
punish. And leave you to lick your wounds. We have watched you, and wondered at you. So
much that is good. So much that is right. Yet, so much that falters and fails.
ATKINS
You've come to test us, then?
KLAATU'S
VOICE
The Great Graduation Examination, yes!
ATKINS
And if we succeed?
KLAATU'S
VOICE
You move up in the Universe.
ATKINS
And...failing...
KLAATU'S
VOICE
...stay where you are, or
move down to darkness. But, all your own doing. You have already lit your fuse. No
need for us to light it. We can put it out, of course, and take some of your Toys away.
The ones that threaten us and the Universe. After all, a Nursery is no place for such
things.
ATKINS
Are we that young, then?
KLAATU'S
VOICE
Just out of the cave, the
crib, just fallen from the Tree, and forgiveable, but dangerous. Enough. Gather the people
for the Great Exam, or the Great Trial, the Test, mean? Gather all your optimists, bring
all your cynics. We must hear the pros and cons, The Human Race For and Against the Human
Race.
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
31. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS
They won't come!
KLAATU'S
VOICE
They will. When we have
frightened them somewhat.
ATKINS
Nothing can frighten them!
KLAATU'S
VOICE
You think not?
The crystal oblong glows.
KLAATU's face, asleep,
almost seems to smile. He murmurs.
KLAATU'S
VOICE
We have ways....
A soft chime rings. The
humming stops. The crystal oblong swarms with shadows and goes dark.
As does the face of
KLAATU.
ATKINS would say more,
but, seeing this, stops, turns, pulls back, goes...
Out through the circling
light and shadow of the corridors.
Outside the OFFICIAL is
waiting. ATKINS says:
ATKINS
Call a press conference
for five this afternoon.
OFFICIAL
We dont want any press!
ATKINS
(looks at the ship)
They do.
OFFICIAL
It's Christmas Day! |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
32. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 ATKINS
Can't think of a better day for it.
OFFICIAL
We
ATKINS
That ship can
destroy this building, any time it wants.
OFFICIAL
My God! The building
cost 200 million do11ars!
ATKINS
That ship is worth...
(makes up a number)
seventeen billion dollars.
That goes it. The
OFFICIAL is overwhelmed with such facts.
OFFICIAL
Five? Hard to organize it by --
He stops, because:
The spacecraft has
groaned like Marley's ghost, trembling with power!
OFFICIAL
(swallows)
Five.
He grabs a phone.
CUT TO:
Outside, the
wilderness around the gantries. ATKINS looks up.
At the far top of one
of the Apollo structures, he sees a small figure. It must be the one oerson he wants to
see now.
He climbs up
toward....KLAATA....who is waiting for him. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
33. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 On top of the gantry, KLAATA does indeed wait for him.
They stand looking at the
spread of the world, and beyond to the Vehicle Assemb1y Building where, on one vast
300-foot side, the NASA officials have caused to be strung, in outline, a Christmas tree
made entirely of wire and lit bulbs; a tree same 200 feet high, softly glowing in the
overcast day.
ATKINS
Will they come, do you think?
KLAATA
(lightly)
The reporters? To the
news conference? They had better.
ATKINS
Or you'll teach them
reverse sums in 'take-away'?
She nods, the wind
blowing her hair.
ATKINS
What will you take away, first?
KLAATA
(thinking)
Everyone must be surprised.
He stares at her as any
man would stare at any woman who is a special windvane to a special weather that blows
across the Cape this Christmas Day.
ATKINS
My good sense is gone already.
She gazes at him quietly,
reading his temperature.
KLAATA
For awhile, I'll hold onto mine.
(she gestures to the
spread of Canaveral)
We're out to save the World, aren't we? |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
34. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 He looks at the World, at her, and back to the Wor1d,
laughing quietly at some small thought.
ATKINS
On your world, do women
have headaches?
KLAATA
(laughs)
Never!
ATKINS
(stunned)
What a world that must be.
KLAATA
And here?
ATKINS
(goes serious)
Men have headaches, all the time,
KLAATA
War does that...
She touches his elbow,
pulls gently,
KLAATA
Shall we go find a cure?
ATKINS
You're the teacher.
She turns at the top of
the stair in the blowing wind, and gazes at him, nodding quietly.
KLAATA
Yes. I am.
They go down into the
world of Christmas,
The reporters begin to
gather for the News Conference. Not many, of course. It's short notice. It's Christmas,
Reporters are coming up from Miami, of course, and a few who can fly in from some of the
Southern States in a few hours. Local TV will link into national TV, naturally. We see the
accumulation of people at the Cape. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
35. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 They are gathering outside the great doors of the Vehic1e
Assembly Building.
Announcements are being
made over TV, cross-country, around the world.
Coming downstairs in his
hotel, ATKINS glances over at the Christmas tree, which a moment before was filled with
ornaments.
The tree is empty of
baubles, of light.
Only the crystal fire
hangs at the top, a promising Star. ATKINS turns to a BELLHOP nearby.
ATKINS
Hey, Chuck, is Christmas
over already?
He nods to the tree. The
BELLHOP stares, is astounded.
BELLHOP
Hey, who took off a11 the
ornaments!?
ATKINS turns to find
KLAATA there. He glances back at the tree, and at her again. He suspects her of this.
ATKINS
Well?
KLAATA
What are a few baubles?
Its the spirit that counts, right?
Disquieted, ATKINS
leaves.
The Press Conference
convenes. ATKINS finds himself as interlocutor for a highly unlikely visitation, and an
amusing, to almost everyone, concept: |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
36. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 THE INHABITANTS OF THE WORLD, BROUGHT TOGETHER IN SOME
SORT OF RAMSHACKLE TRIAL, WILL BE ASKED TO PUT THEMSELVES IN THE DOCKET.
The arguments to be
presented in this great J'Accuse case, where a11 mankind is involved, are as follows:
DOES THE HUMAN RACE
DESERVE TO GO ON EXISTING?
or, conversely:
DO WE DESERVE, BECAUSE WE
ARE EVIL AND HALF-MAD APES, TO BE ELIMINATED?
or, somewhere between:
CAN THESE BEASTS, FAIRLY
FRESH FROM THE TREE AND THE CAVE, EVOLVE TOWARD SOMETHING MUCH MORE WORTHWHILE?
and
ARE WE HALF THERE
ALREADY, AND WITH A LITTLE PUSH CAN WE MAKE IT UP THE SCALE INTO THE UNIVERSE?
or
IS IT A LOST CAUSE, LET'S
GIVE UP ON OURSELVES?
The sun is beginning to
set over Canaveral as the last of the Conference is being held.
The reporters, in jovial
mood, make mild jokes. After all, this is a ridiculous media event. Nothing has been shown
so far, nothing proven. Why should it all be taken seriously? Why should the bright
speakers of the world come or go anywhere to prove or disprove Mankind's right to go on
existing? Where's the threat, the proof? |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
37. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 At the height of the reporters' derision:
The great doors of the
Vehicle Assembly Building thunder wide.
The spacecraft of KLAATU
pulses with energy, heat, power! And the vast Christmas Tree, which we have seen earlier,
strung and lit on the 300-foot side of the building, darkens, goes out, vanishes. It is a
tree, we must explain, shaped only of lights, a sketch of a tree delineated by wires and
bulbs.
But now, it is gone!
Its illumination vanishes
from the faces of the reporters. At the same moment, across the land, the lights on
hundreds of trees blink out, blink out, blink out. They darken as startled people look up
in a swift montage.
At the end of which, as
the reporters look up at the blank wall of the VAB, the great doors rumble SHUT.
Ending the scene.
Across the land in the
next few hours, small things begin to vanish. In a series of montage CUTS, we move from
home to home across country, across the world, as tiny objects, close at hand, begin to
disappear.
In one home, a woman,
sewing, misses her thimble.
In another, needles
vanish.
Some children's metal
toys simply 'blink' out of existence! Consternation. Wails of frustration! |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
38. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 Meanwhile, on the TV screens of the world, on every
station, we see CUT after CUT, a MONTAGE of war, guns, explosions, invasions, tanks, Jets,
people fleeing on roads, devastated cities. Then, a quick series of CUTS of people in
various cities, in various parlors:
A MAN
Wait a minute--where's that?
ANOTHER
MAN
Which army--
A WOMAN
Another war--?
A THIRD
MAN
Wait. That's Korea!
FOURTH
No, Vietnam!
FIFTH
No, the Maginoe Line, 1940!
SIXTH
E1 Salvador!
CUT TO:
The interior of the ship,
in a vast circle above Klaatu's crystal 'bed,' we see the same TV scenes repeated, a dozen
times, a hundred times, on 200 screens above his resting place.
ATKINS and KLAATA,
standing in shadow, look up at the devastation, hear the shrieks and explosions.
ATKINS
Which country, which war, which year--?
KLAATA
Every country, every war, every year. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
39. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 More montages of explosions, troops, tanks, planes.
KLAATA
Can you tell them apart?
ATKINS stares, shakes his
head.
KLAATA
Manchuria, 1929.
Turkey, 1922.
France, 1918...
Russia, 1942...
Japan, 1944...Brazil...
Argentina...Morocco...
South Africa...Pakistan.
She points to all the
images, which whirl and confuse themselves.
KLAATA
Different names, but
always the same terror, the same despair. We will stop that.
The images rush and
shriek to a vast concussion.
WHICH she cuts across by
touching a lever.
Darkness. Silence. The
wars are erased.
KLAATU's crystal tomb
glows quietly.
In the silence, ATKINS
turns to look at KLAATA, questioningly.
ATKINS
You waited thirty years.
Why did you come back, now?
KLAATA
We said we would.
ATKINS
You also said you'd
destroy Earth if we didn't behave. What are you waiting for?
|
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
40. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 KLAATA touches buttons on her wrist-computer. Quieter
scenes blossom on the vast screens above KLAATU's 'bed.'
KLAATA
You've behaved better
than you think. That's why we delayed. You're strange people. You've actually done some
things right!
ATKINS
Such as...?
KLAATA
Must I, from another
world, tell you? Thirty years ago people still died from polio, malaria, scarlet fever.
You've stopped all that. Your country invented new kinds of wheat and corn. You ship food
to 90 countries. Immigrants pour in to your land, 500 thousand a year. Why are they coming
here if you're as bad as you say?
ATKINS
I didn't say...
KLAATA
No? You don't like
yourself, your world, your people. How peculiar that I find much to defend. All this,
that, there, didn't exist, thirty years ago. Youve reached the Moon. You've touched
Mars and Jupiter and Saturn!
ATKINS
And stopped touching...
KLAATA
But you can do it again!
ATKINS
If I had my way...yes.
But Im only one person.
KLAATA
Ah, and so am I. But watch me! |
"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
41. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 There is no threat in her voice, only wi11 and energy;
much fervor, a great fire.
He turns to look at her
face, and up at the screens.
ATKINS
You going to teach them?
(nods out at the world)
The world doesn't like
teachers, do-gooders.
KLAATA laughs.
KLAATA
But, I'm here to do bad!
He is stunned. She
continues, amused, gesturing at the landscapes.
KLAATA
I come not with Christmas
gifts, but to take away!
KLAATA searches the
horizons on the screen.
KLAATA
There, see? That oil
tanker. What if I took it and all the oil in the world away to celebrate New Year's?
ATKINS
You'd be dead by noon tomorrow!
KLAATA
Yes!?
She speaks this, first to
ATKINS, then down at the semi-illuminated place where KLAATU half-sleeps.
KLAATA
Yes? |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
42. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 The crystal oblong beats three heartbeats of light. His
voice whispers:
KLAATU'S
VOICE
No
.
Then she is off, through
the shadowed ship corridors.
ATKINS can only follow.
The great seal of the
spaceship shuts.
KLAATA is on her way out
of the building. BAR KY is there, and grabs ATKINS' arm.
BARNEY
My God, all hell's broken loose!
ATKINS
Wha--?
BARNEY
The whole world thinks
this is a plot by the United States to blackmail them!
ATKINS
But don't they see--?
BARNEY
Not a damn thing. She'd
better do something spectacular, or--
ATKINS
Spectacular?! God!
ATKINS leaves. Outside,
KLAATA is waiting for him by his car.
ATKINS
My friend says, you'd
better work a miracle.
|
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
43. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 She has been watching the quick images in her
wrist-computer, news clips from around the world. She switches it off.
KLAATA
Yes. I see. We11?
Has anyone missed the
thimbles yet? Or the needles?
ATKINS
What?
KLAATA
Turn out your pockets.
Your coins, your money.
He turns out his pockets,
shows her what change he has.
KLAATA
Put one here.
He places a penny on the
wrist-computer surface, which immediately hums and pulses with sums and computations.
KLAATA touches a tab.
The pennies in ATKINS'
open palm vanish.
ATKINS
Hey! How'd you do that?
She touches her
wrist-computer. An image of round fire is projected high on the side of the Vehicle
Assembly Building.
KLAATA
What's that?
ATKINS
The Sun.
KLAATA
And Earth was once in
the Sun, yes, all your elements, everything? Everything in this building, every bit of
ground we stand on? Hydrogen, oxygen, nitrogen.
|
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
44. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 As she touches her wrist, the colors of the Sun boil and
change hue, according to the element named.
KLAATA
If we can analyze the
Sun's elements, we can analyze anything. The copper in your pennies, the silver in your
pocket--
ATKINS
Sum it up and wipe it out?
KLAATA
Me could. We might.
She flicks off the great
Sun image. He gets in the car. It won't start. He looks at her, suspiciously.
KLAATA
Only if I say go, does it go.
ATKINS
(it gets to him)
There are 300 million
cars in the world!
KLAATA
And sometimes, don't you
think, how nice it would be, if they all stopped?
ATKINS
Nice.
(a beat)
...Terrible.
KLAATA
Go.
KLAATA has said go, the
car goes, as she touches her wrist-computer and the engine juices itself.
ATKINS
Go...yes...Go. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
45. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 They drive back toward the hotel. On the way, he says:
ATKINS
Can you make all the
needles ~n the world disappear?
KLAATA
If we wished.
ATKINS
And the nails that hold
paintings on the walls?
KLAATA
We could make a million
pictures fall.
ATKINS
What about nail files and scissors?
KLAATA
The fingernails of the
world will be longer next year.
ATKINS
Why are you starting small?
KLAATA
Isn't it more interesting
to drop hints? Let the world know, bit by bit, doorknob by doorhinge by clothespin that it
is the time of Indian Giving, the time of taking back, the time of Uninventing all the
inventions, large and small, in the history of Man?
ATKINS
God!
KLAATA
Oh, God, indeed.
KLAATA then explains in
some detail what their plan, her plan, KLAATU's plan, is. To let the panic grow in little
starts and stops, little vanishings, little disappearances, at first unnoticed. Who cares,
for instance, if all the |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
46. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 tiddlewinks in the world vanish on the same day? Or all
the collar-stays? Or all the pennies which now burden us and are almost worthless?
Somewhere down the line
OIL!
But they are at the
hotel.
Outside KLAATA's room, he
prepares to leave, when she holds the door open and waits, She is obviously inviting him
in.
ATKINS
Klaata---?
KLAATA
We have worked more than
enough miracles for one day. Now, let's work our own.
ATKINS
Still --
KLAATA
Time is running out. We
may never have a quiet moment again. And--
ATKINS
And?
She laughs, gently.
KLAATA
My world waits for me to
bring your child back with me.
ATKINS
(blinks)
From just this one night?
KLAATA
It is written. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
47. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 KLAATA goes in, pulling off her Jumper-top as she goes.
The door is wide open. ATKINS glances around, embarrassed, hurries in, shuts the door.
In the midst of their
love-making, she says:
KLAATA
Have you ever wondered
what a woman feels and thinks as she lies like this?
He nods.
KLAATA
Have you ever, for a
moment, wanted to be in her eyes, looking back at you?
He thinks, at last nods.
KLAATA
Well.
She Couches his eyes,
closes hers.
KLAATA
So...
He is stunned,
astonished, transfigured. They are separate but one. In their kissing, souls go back and
forth, or so it seems. He breaks away at last.
ATKINS
Can everyone on your world do that?
She nods.
ATKINS
Does anyone ever get out of bed!?
KLAATA
On1y to come nag at you Earthmen. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
48. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 Much later, lying side by side, she looks at the ceiling
and says:
KLAATA
It is written.
He looks at her, gently,
questioning.
KLAATA
When I am home, if I
wish, I will have seven sons and seven daughters.
ATKINS
All mine?
She nods.
ATKINS
All in one year!?
She shakes her head.
KLAATA
In seven different years.
We women up there, are not quite the same as yours. We have an even greater talent for
survival.
ATKINS
Are you sure that my sons
and daughters are with you now?
KLAATA
Perhaps...you had better
make certain.
Whereupon he moves toward
her again and they kiss and
FADE TO
BLACK.
The next few days, a
series of further 'take-aways' occur, ending with most of the cars of the world grinding
to a halt. The world shakes its fists at the sky, but, the world gives in: |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
49. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 It agrees to be put on trial. The defendants gather at
Canaveral. The list of things that each country has done is impressive. The protestants
sound much like KLAATA as she defended Earth against itself, to ATKINS. Harvests are up.
Floods have been controlled. Disease has been conquered in most of the world. The computer
is beginning to lift the burden of boring work from millions of people. The black middle
class HAS grown, etc., etc.
In the middle of which,
the intellectual leaders, on trial before the Universe, begin to bicker, put each other on
trial. For the first time, KLAATU, having been silent for days, summons the leaders to a
final confrontation. Two dozen men and women from various countries circle his crystal
enclosure which glows with light.
Shadows come and go over
KLAATUs recumbent face as he accuses them, point by point:
KLAATUs
VOICE
Look at you! What
shall we take away next? What good will it do? Will you learn your lessons?
The CAMERA circles the
faces of the embarrassed and somewhat ashamed leaders.
KLAATU continues:
KLAATU'S
VOICE
If we destroyed your
airships you would fight on land. Rob you of your cannons, you'd use rifles. Seize your
rifles, you'd fire pistols. Steal your pistols and you'd make bows and arrows.
(more...) |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
50. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 KLAATU'S VOICE
(continued)
Take your bows and arrows
and you'd make spears, axes, knives. Take it all away and you'd use fists. Cut off your
fists and you'd kick with your feet. Cut off your feet and you'd bite with your dumb
teeth. When, when, when will it end?
The leaders stare,
stunned and silent, no response ready. KLAATU goes on:
KLAATU'S
VOICE
You think that I,
Gort, my ship, are miraculous...
But you are
miraculous...if you wish! Have you no eyes? Don't you see the grand Universe? Have
you no hands, to touch and build all the great architectures that will save you Forever?
What's wrong with you?
Why - why are you so -
mean?
Silence. Half of the
gathered leaders have their eyes shut, sealing out the sight and the sound of the man and
the voice half-in, half-out of a technological tomb.
KLAATU'S
VOICE
Must a half-dead man
teach you some final lessons?
His crystal oblong pulses
with a single heartbeat.
KLAATU'S
VOICE
...Klaata!...!
KLAATA moves forward from
the shadows.
KLAATU'S
VOICE
A gift is never
appreciated. We cannot give you your future. You must build and give it to
yourselves. But let us, at least, show it to you.
(quietly
now)
Klaata. |
"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
51. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 KLAATA touches the controls. The
spacecraft thrusts up
to hang above Earth,
halfway to the Moon....
Where, suspended over
Earth, KLAATA touches yet other computer tabs.
And the bottom side of
the great Disc unshutters its eye, which is to say reveals itself as a great viewing
crystal around which the military and power elite circle and gasp. For the whole continent
of America, leaning into the shadow of night, can be seen below.
KLAATA touches a
series of buttons and:
Out beyond, in Space,
great platforms construct themselves. The power elite, stunned, watch as the--
Platforms fit Jigsaw
within jigsaw, as pieces are brought up through the night heavens by Shuttle and by other
rocket vehicles and Astronauts scramble out to unfold the puzzle and slot it back together
into a mile-long flat mirror surface which blinks and burns with sunlight:
While below, on Earth, in
great screens placed within the Ship's interior, we can see vast receiving Cups being
welded into place, here, there, and about the continent. While still more platforms are
built in Space, two thousand or three thousand miles apart, circling the Earth.
There is a great hum
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
52. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 KLAATA touches the final buttons
to finish the work and ATKINS says:
ATKINS
That's not real..,?
KLAATA
(smiles)
No.....Holograms,
three-dimensional projections of things that could be. Images of possible dreams.
There.
She touches a last lever.
The great Solar Platforms
(for that is what they are) turn magnificently on their silent hinges.
And catch the Sun!
For they are high enough
above the Earth to get the slanted rays of the Sun beyond the night planet!
KLAATA
And here....and now...here.
She touches the controls.
The light beams flash
down to Earth....
Are caught in the
receiving Cups!
KLAATA looks upon her
work and then says:
KLAATA
Now...let us light the
cities of the world.
She moves her hand over a
territorial spread of continental land under her fingers, in miniature. The audience
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
53. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 For below in the night world, from
New York, then on to Boston and Philadelphia, and across country, city by city, town by
town, lights up!
In a great flare and
spread and flash of light, the entire American continent fires its town and city lights!
It is a magnificent
moment, at which all can only stare, frozen in delight!
KLAATA moves her hand on.
The Ship tilts and moves
in Space.
The Platforms flash and
turn to drink more Sun!
And the cities of Europe
light themselves, one by one.
It is like a scene,
reversed, in which all the candles in a great hall or cathedral have been blown out but
now, in a miraculous instant, relight themselves!
KLAATA lights all the
night world of Earth.
ATKINS speaks at last,
staring down.
ATKINS
Can we do that?
KLAATA looks from him to
the illuminated planet.
KLAATA
Yes! And when it's done,
no more navies protecting oil-lines, no more shortages, no more blackmail, no more need.
Only light, forever, all night every night for ten thousand years!
She touches a button and:
The Space Platforms blink
out, fly apart, fragmented dreams. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
54. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 The lights of the world go out.
The faces staring down,
turn dark.
KLAATA gestures.
The Ship lands back at
Canaveral. There, with the solar display over, and the lights of the world gone dark...
the leaders of the various nations fall into their old patterns of animosity, hatred,
petty irritability:
Who will build the first
platform?
Who will benefit most?
Can the solar platforms
be used for war?
No reason why not!
Good reason, therefore,
to build and--
The crystal tomb of
KLAATU pulses and goes dark.
KLAATA turns on the
leaders, stares at them, then gives instructions to the Ship's computers.
There is a great stir in
the heavens of Earth.
More spacecraft arrive
from out of the Universe!
Is the moment of utter
destruction at hand?
With KLAATU perhaps
finally dead in his dark crystal,
KLAATA makes the final
motions:
And a thousand spacecraft
thunder down!
ATKINS, seeing this,
comments ironically:
ATKINS
Is this...the Ghost of
Christmas Future?
KLAATA
(quietly, firmly)
.
yes.... |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
55. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 The ships are coming down out of
the sky.
One spacecraft arrives
over Mecca.
Another over Berlin.
A third over London.
A fourth over Washington,
D.C.
A fifth over Chicago.
A sixth over Denver.
A seventh over Los
Angeles.
An eighth over San
Francisco.
A ninth over Tokyo.
A tenth over Delhi.
An eleventh over Peking.
A twelfth over New York
City.
And in each city the
people are looking up.
But, especially the
children, those from six to eleven years old, are staring at the sky with its wonderful
beauties and its great musics.
The ships suspend
themselves in the air only one hundred feet up.
The people wait. The
children wait.
CUT TO:
KLAATA within her Ship,
surrounded, on the domewalls, by images of all the ships, all the cities, all the people,
all the children. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
56. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 At which moment, do we, or do we
not, hear a voice from KLAATU's crystal tomb whisper:
KLAATU'S
VOICE
Now!
KLAATA touches a
light-source disc. She speaks. Outside, in the area near the VAB Building, the leaders of
Earth hear her voice.
KLAATA
I hear you speak, but
what you are really saying is you do not believe in the future. You do not believe in the
future! Well, then. We will take it away from you....
She touches a control.
The spacecraft move down
over the cities of the world.
And as they move in
thunders, a music comes from them.
And the children of the
world look up, here, there, everywhere, beyond!
The older people stand,
transfixed.
The ships hover and
glide, and are now only a few feet above the ground.
And the portals open, to
an even grander music.
And the children begin to
move.
As ATKINS watches on the
screens inside the Ship, with KLAATA beside him.
And he sees children of
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
57. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 As the older people cry out but
cannot move.
And the children of
Chicago and New York and Moscow and Peking and Tokyo begin to go on board the ships. By
the tens of thousands they move, happily, called by the music. The Pied Pipers of All Time
are summoning them. They can only, gladly, go.
ATKINS watches,
astonished and moved, as:
Children from every walk
of life move toward the spacecraft. More of which land to summon:
Rich and poor alike. High
and low. Children of the powerless as well as children of the powerful, the controllers of
the world. Children of every color, shape, and size. But they all move gladly, not looking
back. ATKINS cries out, at last:
ATKINS
My God, you're inhuman!
KLAATA responds quietly,
with sympathy, standing near him, directing the multi-illuminated computer under her
fingers, watching the exodus of the young on the screens circling their heads:
KLAATA
No. We care. They are
your future. . . which we will deliver back into your hands if you deserve them. Do you
know your history? Thousands of years ago, your nomad tribal chieftans traded their sons
and daughters to insure against attack and war. We do them one better.
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
58. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 She glances at the screens. He
stares:
As more ships fill, more
children arrive.
KLAATA
(stunned)
700 thousand, a million.
Rich, poor, weak, powerful, every color, every custom, every religion, everywhere.
She reads his face which
is not as yet accepting.
KLAATA
What if we left them here
- for you to do what with? Burn and destroy with your ignorance, your hate, your blind
wars?
ATKINS
(bursts out)
What are you - some sort
of - dumb optimist!?
She glances at the
screens.
Outside, in various
cities, we see the last of the children going aboard.
CUT BACK
TO:
KLAATA nodding, speaking:
KLAATA
Do I think you
will work and build and succeed in trying to earn back the future, deserve to have your
children among you once more?
(a beat)
Yes. You will.
ATKINS watches the
screen. It is sinking in now. Slowly he says:
ATKINS
We must. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
59. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 She presses a series of buttons
and levers.
The spacecraft are
beginning to seal themselves up. KLAATA watches this, looks at ATKINS, says:
KLAATA
Love me.
ATKINS
What else can I do?
You've stolen my child, too.
KLAATA
(touches her front, quietly)
No. It was given freely.
ATKINS
(nods, shuts his eyes a moment)
It was.
He opens his eyes, looks
at the screens, at her.
ATKINS
Can I go?
KLAATA
You're needed here. In
case they sometimes for a moment forget. Then you yell, for all the children. For your sons.
ATKINS
Sons?!!
KLAATA
It is written.
She kisses him tenderly.
They hold to each other. In a last moment, she looks up: |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
60. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 Sees all the faces of all the
parents in the world, standing, waiting, watching, unable to move. Then back to KLAATA as
she says, quietly:
KLAATA
Oh, Pinocchio,
Pinocchio...if you act well, and learn to love each other, one day you will become real
humans.
He holds her at arm's
length, nods, turns, walks. Then runs.
All the ships are sealing
up!
ATKINS steps swiftly from
KLAATA's ship.
KLAATA looks at:
The crystal oblong where
KLAATU sleeps. It pulses with one great. impulse of light, sound, music.
She thrusts a lever.
And all the spacecraft
move...up!
The spacecraft in Moscow
hovers, then shoots straight up, up over and away from the Kremlin. We see the bright
pear-shapes of the churches in Red Square diminish.
The spacecraft in Rome
hovers and rises above St. Peter's. We see Bernini's columns fall away below!
The spacecraft over
London, moves up along the walls of the Houses of Parliament, shoots by the face of Big
Ben, and vanishes in the sky.
The spacecraft in India,
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
61. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 In China, away from the Great
Buddha.
In South America, Rio,
past and up from the Christ of the Andes!
In Paris, from the
base of the Eiffel Tower to the top!
In New York, along up,
up, from the foot of the Statue of Liberty past the head, the torch, and gone!
The people of Earth,
intercut, shot after quick shot,
watch as:
The scores of
spacecraft, in thunder, vanish into the clouds, into the stars. And as they fade, we hear
KLAATU's voice (or his daughter's):
VOICE
Follow us. Follow!
If you succeed, you
will find your children, you will find and keep your Future.
What is your answer, 0
people of Earth? You who disbelieve in futures, and so have had it taken from you?
Speak!
No....act!
Do! Build. Rise up! Live!
Well?
The last ships are
gone.
Out among the
gantries, ATKINS finds the stunned officials staring at the sky.
ATKINS
Well? |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
62. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 They are all looking at the stars
in the almost midnight sky. Someone says:
A MAN
Do we follow, blast 'em,
grab our kids back?
A GOVERNOR, or an
OFFICIAL, or the PRESIDENT, looks at the MAN as if he were mad.
GOVERNOR
No!
(a beat)
We'll go earn our way.
Deserve our future.
The GOVERNOR (or
PRESIDENT) looks over at the VAB.
GOVERNOR
There's only one flag on
that building.
ATKINS
Should be a thousand.
GOVERNOR
By this time next month,
there will be. A real United Nations, at last. And more... did it ever strike you... it's
like a big cathedral inside?
The doors are open. They
look in at the emptiness where the spacecraft was and now all is vast and sepulchral.
GOVERNOR
I wonder...
ATKINS
If we asked all the
rabbis in the world, all the Moslem prayer-leaders, all the Baptists, all the Buddhist
priests, the Mormon Tabernacle Choir ... and the Pope! to come here some Friday
night, some Saturday noon, some Sunday morning... to celebrate and remember our
children... would they come?
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
63. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 The depths of the Vehicle Assembly
Building stir with future shadows, songs, chairs, whispers, prayers, voices. ATKINS,
seeing, half-hearing this, asks:
ATKINS
When do we start packing
to leave and go - straight up?
PRESIDENT
(with quiet determination)
Now.
ATKINS
(somewhat doubtful)
Not tomorrow?
PRESIDENT
Now!
He looks around at the
gantries.
ATKINS' wrist-watch
sounds off the hour.
ATKINS
Midnight, sir.
PRESIDENT
(blinks)
Midnight?
ATKINS
(quietly)
Happy New Year.
One of the gantries, far
away, takes fire with a ghost blaze, a spirit illumination, as a phantom rocket, in muted
thunders, takes off.
The men stare around.
The PRESIDENT, ATKINS, in
their minds' eye, see and hear: Ghost rockets thundering up the gantries, away. |
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"THE DAY THE
EARTH STOOD STILL II"/ Bradbury
64. Revised Treatment - 11 September 1981 INTERCUT, the faces of all, the
PRESIDENT, ATKINS. As gantry after gantry lights and ghost rockets rise! The PRESIDENT,
imagining this, says quietly:
PRESIDENT
Happy New Year.
ATKINS looks up as:
A final gantry blazes. A
final rocket thunders.
We go with it, looking
back at the faces of those men.
We start CLOSE UP, in
their eyes, their faces, then go straight up for a swift ten thousand yards in seven
seconds! And Earth falls away below, a small orb lost in the stars.
MUSIC
And:
THE END. |
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