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The Day the
Earth Stood Still II
The Evening of the
Second Day
An Outline for a Film
by
Ray Bradbury
10 March 1981
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This is the outline for a film
written by Ray Bradbury in 1981. This draft, although commisioned by the studio, was never
filmed. The outline script is 50 pages in length. This first appeared on Dreamerwww.com. The site is currently down. When that site comes back up, I will redirect this back to the site that did all the work. |
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The Day the Earth
Stood Still II
THE
EVENING OF THE SECOND DAY
an
outline for a film
by
RAY
BRADBURY
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10
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THE
EVENING OF THE SECOND DAY
by
RAY BRADBURY
Canaveral. Christmas
Eve. Sunset.
Far off we can hear
carols being sung...Christmas lights
at a distance, faint
laughter.
The CAMERA prowls over
the landscape. We see the largest building in the world, silhouetted against the setting
sun... the Vehicle Assembly Building where the Apollo rockets were fitted together and
sent out to the launch-pads to go to the Moon.
The CAMERA peers
briefly into the cathedral interior of the VAB where, perhaps, in a far alcove we see that
someone has set up a small Christmas tree, lit. Somewhere a radio is playing, a mere
whisper of some Carol or other. The giant hangar is empty. It is obvious that almost
everyone has gone home early for the Holiday.
The CAMERA prowls
inside for a moment, and we may we11 see, standing tall, in the shadows, the titanic ghost
shapes of Apollo rockets, motionless and waiting.
The CAMERA moves out
into sunset dune territory, scans the various gantries which are deserted. The wind blows
dust over the lone machineries. The CAMERA finds and reads, quickly, a sign which says:
ABANDON IN PLACE, No Further Activity Authorized. Perhaps we
can hear an echo of the
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2 old
sounds, voices counting down, the merest murmur of machineries, radios, computers.
THE
VOICES
Oxygen
check.......hydrogen check.......ten minutes to launch...etc., etc...
The sounds rise and
fall in the sound of surf from the nearby sea.
THE
VOICES
One
minute and counting.......
The CAMERA fixes on
the Apollo 11 gantry.
A VOICE
...seven...six...five...four...
three...two...one...we have ignition!
There might be a
mighty blast, but instead an explosion of -- wings!
Birds fly up from the
dunes in a great bang of flying!
A flurry of motion and
color as...
Click, click, click,
click, a MAN with a camera rises up to photograph this ascension.
The birds wheel and
fly off.
The MAN continues to
photograph them in the sunset light.
Then he stops, checks
his camera, looks around, moves off.
The CAMERA follows him
along the dunes, east the abandoned gantry where only the wind sounds now. He blinks up at
the vast metal machineries as he passes, his face full of remembrance. He stops to snap a
picture.
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3 A car
goes along the road a hundred yards off, a Christmas tree tied to its too, and voices
singing raggedly: "We wish you a merry Christmas, we wish you a merry Christmas
...and a ... happy New Year..."
He snaps a picture of
the sign: ABANDON IN PLACE.
He reads the sign
quietly, shakes his head.
Surf falls on the
shore.
He is about a hundred
yards from the Vehicle Assembly Building now, and snaps a half dozen quick pictures of it.
As the sun vanishes.
And the light dies on
the vast building.
The MAN quickens his
gaze for he has seen something, perhaps heard something in the sky.
A star is there, very
bright, on the horizon.
THE MAN
It's
bright tonight....
The star glows even
more.
THE MAN
Wait a minute...that's
the wrong place...it can't be Venus!
And out of the sky, as he
watches, comes a craft of some saucerlike shape, immense, vibrant, moving swiftly.
The MAN stares as:
The craft soars down,
the CAMERA moves with it and --
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4 Flies
right through the vast gates of the Vehicle Assembly Building to vanish inside!!!
Stunned, the MAN
watches as:
In the cathedral
interior, the spacecraft hovers, sinks, sets down.
The MAN starts to run.
Even as the great
Gates thunder to shut in the visitor from the sky!
The MAN leaps through
as: the Gates slam.
He turns to look at:
The craft, glowing in
the dark.
He circles it, staring
at it. He whispers to himself:
THE MAN
Wait! I
know this!
He moves around the
vast craft, memory shadowing his face.
THE MAN
Thirty
years ago. Yes!
A sound startles him.
A nearby elevator hums and drifts up in the strutworks, a shadow inside it.
He runs, stops, stares
up: as the elevator slides into the shadowy heights.
The MAN stares from
the elevator to the spacecraft, then jumps, runs, punches a second elevator button. The
second elevator slams its door wide, he leaps in, goes up.
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5 On the
way into the dark mountainslopes of machinery, he stares up at --
That other elevator,
carrying its alien cargo up and on up into yet darker cathedral heights.
It reaches the top of the
Vehicle Assembly Building a good ten seconds ahead of him. Distantly, we see and hear its
door clang wide, and a shadow move.
Reaching the top, the MAN
runs by the other elevator, checking it. He glances up and around at further staircases.
The MAN emerges on the
roof of the VAB as the last light of day fades.
He looks around at
emptiness. The wind mourns up here, as lonely as the wind out in the dunes among the
abandoned rocket pads.
A sound jerks him about.
It is the other elevator
-- going back down into the shadows 400 feet below. Both elevators, in fact! He has been
tricked. Obviously, someone has pushed the button or the second one and leaped out to let
it go down by itself.
Cursing, the MAN races to
a third bank of elevators, and has to wait, while, far below, the other two elevators
reach their destination.
Sliding down out of the
darkness, the MAN emerges and looks around at silence and shadows. Whoever led him up to
trap him on the roof, was gaining time. They have had a fu11 minute or more to vanish.
They are indeed gone.
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
6 A
VOICE
Hey!
The MAN whirls.
A building ATTENDANT has
come out on a catwalk above.
The MAN gazes up as:
The ATTENDANT stares
down, blinking at:
The spacecraft, which
glows and hums, with the small Christmas tree nearby.
The ATTENDANT, stunned,
says:
THE
ATTENDANT
Who put
that gift under my tree?
CUT TO DARKNESS. A slam
of brakes. A car arrives outside.
A door slams.
Feet run.
The MAN is waiting for
this arrival outside in the blowing night.
The arrival is the VAB
DIRECTOR, who glares at the MAN.
DIRECTOR
You've
been drinking , of course?!
He looks into the MAN's
face, sniffs, shakes his head.
DIRECTOR
No. I'll be damned. Who
shut those doors?
He is glaring at the vast
doors now.
THE MAN
I wish I
knew.
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
7 The
DIRECTOR gives him a last glare, plunges on.
DIRECTOR
Get out of
the way!
He opens the squall door
in the great Gate, steps through. And stops, shocked as:
We see what he sees: the
spacecraft, a light unto itself, filling the great church-like interior.
DIRECTOR
(to the MAN)
You just
got your job back.
THE MAN
I didn't
know I was fired.
DIRECTOR
You were.
Come on.
They move off to circle
the mystery.
More officials arrive to
confer. For now, only a few people know of the alien spaceships landing...the MAN,
plus the ATTENDANT, plus the handful of Canaveral people gathered here.
The question is asked:
why did the craft land here, this place, at this hour?
The MAN, let us call him
CHRIS ATKINS, almost responds. A shadow crosses his face. He has half-remembered
some-thing about the visiting ship. But he remains silent.
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8 The
great doors of the Vehicle Assembly Building are locked shut, the various officials are
warned that no single word about this must be said beyond the Base, for the time being.
Someone was aboard the
craft. Someone came out. Someone vanished -- where? He, or she, or it, must be found.
How do you do
that, without knowing what you're looking for?
CHRIS ATKINS speaks up.
ATKINS
Maybe we don't search.
Maybe we wait for it to find us.
DIRECTOR
Why should
it do that?
ATKINS
Because --
it knows one of us.
DIRECTOR
Who?
ATKINS
Me. I
think. I have a hunch.
DIRECTOR
I hope
your hunch is scientific.
ATKINS
And how
will your search pay off?
DIRECTOR
It won't.
Get home. It's Christmas Eve.
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
9 They get
ready to go. The spacecraft suddenly stops humming and glowing. It is at rest. They look
at the dark shape. Beyond it, the small Christmas tree blinks and blinks its lights.
ATKINS
You'll
hear from me.
The DIRECTOR regards him
quietly and at last nods.
DIRECTOR
By God, I
bet we wi11.
They turn to go when:
The spacecraft gives a
short burst of whine and hum.
And all the elevators in
Canaveral, empty, begin to glide up their shafts like great dark spiders, moving up toward
the unseen stars.
The men below look up,
startled.
Four hundred feet above,
the elevators arrive in silence and open their doors up high, where the night winds mourn
through the interstices. The elevators shut their doors and glide back down.
The DIRECTOR looks at the
silent spacecraft.
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
10 DIRECTOR
Did it
do that?
ATKINS nods.
The elevators arrive,
open their doors, stand silent.
ATKINS
Merry Christmas.
DIRECTOR
So they
tell me....
They exit. After they are
gone...the elevator doors whisper shut.
ATKINS drives to his
boarding house. He pauses on the steps to look up at a sign which reads: THE CLEAN,
WELL-LIGHTED PLACE. ROOM AND BOARD. Week or month. Founded 1969. MRS. PERKINS, PROP.
Inside, grand
festivities. The boarders, ten in all, are trimming the Christmas tree.
ATKINS joins in the
trimming, the drinking, the general all-around happiness, but --
His face shadows again
and again with remembrance of what he has seen just a few hours ago,
And...there are new
boarders at the house, One, a man, and of a most peculiar aspect, ATKINS stares at him.
The man flinches self-consciously and at last speaks.
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11 It is a
Cockney accent! He's here to write an article on the Space Shuttle for a London
news-sheet.
What looked so suspicious
at a distance -- and ATKINS has been studying him, across the table, at dinner, where the
man spoke not at all, or in murmurs -- now is shattered by the vulgar reality. This simply
couldn't be a traveler from across the Universe!
Or ... could it?
There's another new
boarder, unseen so far. Arrived today, they say, front upstairs room. A girl, a young lady
that is, name of Clapham or Clarkson, something like that, not feeling we11...will be down
later, they say, over dessert.
Now, trimming the tree,
watching the eccentric-looking Cockney with an ironic eye, ATKINS climbs a small ladder to
place the last baubles on the tree.
ATKINS
Now, where's the star for
the very top!?
A VOICE
Here...
A hand reaches up. In it
is an exquisitely strange and glowing fragment of beauty, a bauble filled with small
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
12 lights,
like an enclosed universe, a constellation, a bit of comet's bridal veil, a lunar
illumination.
ATKINS looks beyond its
soft light, down along the hand and arm that has stretched it up, to the face at the end
of the arm.
It is a beautiful face.
It is a young woman's face, of some twenty-five to thirty radiant years. The light and
shadow of the ornament she offers plays over her cheeks and brow, and fills her eyes.
ATKINS
(stunned)
Upstairs -- front room?
Her eyes fix him gently.
The fine mouth moves.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Upstairs. Front room.
ATKINS is transfixed. His
hand moves to touch the glowing ornament.
A BOARDER
For gosh sakes, hang
the damned thing!
Everyone laughs. ATKINS
flushes, looks dorm at:
The incredibly lovely and
fresh young face.
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
13 He
turns to hang the bauble high to generate gasps and admirations and acclaims. The light
fills the air, touches his face. He almost falls off the ladder when -bang!
The front door slams!
He looks down at:
The empty place where
the YOUNG WOMAN had stood a moment before. She is gone.
ATKINS almost falls
off again, slides down, looks around.
ONE OF
THE MEN
Son,
looks like you missed out!
To general laughter,
he plunges through them.
At the front door he
stares out as:
A car drives off at a
fine pace.
ONE OF
THE MEN
You gonna follow?
ATKINS
Watch my dust!
(a beat)
But...first!
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
14 He
darts upstairs, dares to open the Upstairs Front Room door, looks around at --
The YOUNG WOMAN's room,
which has very little in it. She is obviously traveling light.
An incredibly beautiful
slender valise, made of some strange metal, lies on the bed. He touches it, turns it.
There is no visible lock. He lets it lie, gives the bed and room a last look as if to pick
up some vibrations from so looking.
Turning in the middle of
the room, he feels, we feel, her unseen presence. There is a whisper of sound here, a
touch of strange, but --
He departs.
On his way out the front
door, one of the lady boarders laughs and calls:
LADY
BOARDER
How you know where to go?
ATKINS
Woman hide, but men find!
The door slams.
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
15 He
drives away.
To arrive not long before
midnight back at the Cape.
He parks in front of the
Vehicle Assembly Building, gets out, stares around in the dark wind. Far off, the surf
falls.
The guard outside refuses
him entrance. The DIRECTOR drives up, ATKINS argues with him. Do or do they not want to
know who or what got off the ship? He, ATKINS, may be able to provide a clue. He will find
the 'door' for them.
DIRECTOR
There is no door, no
hatch, no port. Find it, and you're the genius of the century.
(a beat)
Go on in. Ten minutes.
Inside, ATKINS stands
looking at the ship.
He reaches out to touch
it. It hums and glows at his touch, as if in some sort of mechanical recognition.
A shadow crosses his
face. His lips whisper, move, and at last remember. He speaks quietly.
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
16 ATKINS
Klaatu barada nikto...
The ship hums and glows
louder.
ATKINS
(louder, seeing this)
Klaatu barada nikto...
The seam appears.
ATKINS might run, but
doesn't, watches fascinated as:
The 'door' -- the light
seam in the side of the ship -- parts and lets down the rampway leading up to the revealed
port.
From inside come hums and
murmurs of machines that ca11 back memory.
ATKINS
(to himself)
Yes.....yes!
Inside the ship, ATKINS
almost panics when the great quiet door seals behind him, but the look of the shadowed
walkways and corridors draws him on. The sound of dim machineries humming under their
breath calls to him. He circles inward to find:
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
17 The
central room where on quiet display is a crystal block. It is almost like those old
magical displays from traveling miracle-magic shows where someone was kept frozen within a
long block of ice for hours, or days, on end.
Inside the cube, the
crystal, the cold gem-like display lies a man asleep, or dead; probably the latter.
It is, of course, KLAATU,
returned across the years to visit Earth, as promised.
ATKINS circles the quiet
form in the flawless ice, or glass. Faint music stirs. Old voices whisper.
ATKINS dares to touch the
crystal rectangle, the lightest touch. The lights flicker.
KLAATU's voice speaks
across Time. We hear fragments of his old promise to return, for Earth to begin to find
ways to behave.
ATKINS, listening,
remembers hearing some of this as a child.
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THE EVENING OF THE
SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
18 Finally,
KLAATU's VOICE, from a hidden source as his body lies sleeping dead, says:
KLAATU
I have not lived to
return, but return I have. I have brought living flesh with me as teacher. In the days
ahead, the final teaching begins. Go now, and wait for the one who teaches....
The lights dim. The
whispers die. The machineries hum to themselves.
ATKINS departs.
Outside the VAB building,
a few reporters have arrived to confront an angry DIRECTOR.
DIRECTOR
How in hell did you get
in?!
THE
REPORTERS
We just ran over the
guard... Snuck around...! Over the wall.
DIRECTOR
Well you can damn well
snuck around over the wall out!
ONE
REPORTER
Colonel, what's all this about --
DIRECTOR
Not true.
ANOTHER
REPORTER
--some sort of space ship...
DIRECTOR
Lies.
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
19 A
THIRD REPORTER.
--landing here...?
DIRECTOR
No comment, good night, git!
The reporters depart.
More scientists arrive. The DIRECTOR turns to ATKINS.
DIRECTOR
We11?
ATKINS
Nothing.
DIRECTOR
No entry?
ATKINS
(hesitates, lies)
No entry.
(a beat)
I'll try again, tomorrow.
The DIRECTOR looks at
him, smells the lie, but lets him go.
DIRECTOR
Any time.
The DIRECTOR and the
scientists go inside. There is a flash of light, a hum of machinery, as they enter and the
door shuts. ATKINS is left outside in the blowing night wind.
Far off among the
deserted gantries, he sees something move. Instinctively, he walks, then hurries toward
that...
Out on the dunes, by the
abandoned Apollo pads, ATKINS comes upon the YOUNG WOMAN, who stands looking at the
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
20 sea,
the rusting space machineries, and the great Vehicle Assembly Building.
He stands looking at her
in profile. She is dressed in slacks and a trim jacket with a scarf. Her hair blows in the
wind. It is a good clean profile that he sees, with a touch of luminous inner knowledge in
the cheeks, in the brow, in the eyes.
She is not startled when
he arrives, nor, for a long while does she look at him. Then, very quietly, listening to
far radio voices and musics that drift by in the night, Christmas carols coming and going,
she says:
YOUNG
WOMAN
In a few minutes, it's
your Christmas.
He catches the way she
has phrased it. And instead of saying hello, introducing himself, he continues as if they
were picking up a conversation dropped only a moment ago:
ATKINS
Not yours?
The YOUNG WOMAN looks
around at the sea and the land.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Not mine.
This quickens him. She is
admitting things, half sensed.
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
21 She is
looking around at the dunes now, and the ruins of the old space pads.
ATKINS
Do you like our world?
The YOUNG WOMAN looks,
thinks, responds.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Some of it. Not all.
Her eyes are fixed to the
rusting machines now. He looks with her.
ATKINS
All of this was -- great -once.
She nods and muses on
this truth.
YOUNG
WOMAN
I know. What a shame.
What a waste.
ATKINS defends the land,
the ruins.
ATKINS
It'll be great again some
day. We'll rebuild. You'll see --
YOUNG
WOMAN
Will I?
She looks at him for the
first time. It is an incredible face. The eyes take him down to the bone.
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
22 He
almost backs off, she is examining him so clearly, so easily, so completely.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Wi11 I even be here? For
that matter -- will you?
Again the clear gaze.
Again, he almost
pulls back. There is no threat in her voice, but he is vaguely uneasy.
ATKINS
Yes!
(a beat)
That is -- unless
something --
happens.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Ah! Things do happen,
dont they? People -- go away.
ATKINS
I'm not leaving, till I
change all this.
They look at Canavera1,
the night, the sea.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Then, you're in charge here?
He gazes into her face.
ATKINS
You know I'm not.
YOUNG
WOMAN
(after a beat)
That could change.
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
23 He
senses that she might very we11 be the one to change it.
ATKINS
Oh, Lord, if only--!
YOUNG
WOMAN
What?
ATKINS
I lie in bed nights,
wishing I ran the world!
YOUNG
WOMAN
What would you do if
someone gave it to you?
ATKINS
I'd clean it a11 up!
YOUNG
WOMAN
Or destroy it...
ATKINS
Yes. If I wasn't careful.
(a beat)
I'd be careful.
(catches himself)
Famous last words.
Far away there are sounds
of celebration. A clock strikes midnight.
She turns to look and
listen.
The wind blows over the
dunes.
YOUNG
WOMAN
There. It's midnight.
ATKINS
Time for a Second Annunciation?
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
24 She
knows what he is speaking about. The knowledge of the Biblical Annunciation is in her
glowing face as she turns back to him.
YOUNG
WOMAN
What would you like to
have announced?
ATKINS looks from her to
the world far across the land, past the silent gantries.
ATKINS
That this Christmas morn,
we get the grandest gift that man ever got. That something incredible and wonderful is
about to happen, that will change us forever and be only for the good!
She is taken and pleased
with her possible friend and pupil.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Miracles do happen, you
know.
Repentance is possible.
The response can be mercy.
The result can be salvation.
ATKINS
For me? For all of us?
YOUNG
WOMAN
All.
ATKINS
How do we start?
She looks around.
YOUNG
WOMAN
With a premature celebration.
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THE EVENING OF THE
SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
25 She
touches her wrist which is encircled with a silver band with miniaturized computer tabs
engraved on it.
The great doors of the
VAB thunder open. Light pours out.
She touches her wrist
again.
And the lights on the far
gantries spring on. They are like immense Christmas trees in the night.
ATKINS stares, stunned
and incredulous.
The gantries blaze. The
music of the world rises fitfully on the wind.
YOUNG
WOMAN
I wish you well.
She steps and takes his
face in her hands and kisses him very quietly on the brow. He is immensely moved by a11 of
this.
ATKINS
Merry Christmas....
She turns and touches her
wrist.
The gantry 'trees', the
lights, go out.
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
26 The VAB
doors thunder shut. The music is gone. The night is still. The wind blows.
She touches his eyelids
with two fingers.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Stay there.
His eyes are shut. He
cannot open them.
She backs off and is
gone.
He hears her moving away.
ATKINS
Wait!
From the darkness we see
her shape pause, we hear her voice.
YOUNG
WOMAN
You know where I'm going.
ATKINS
Your name!?
She responds, further
off, turning to send her voice back in the night wind.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Klaata.
He quickens, startled,
feverish, eyes shut.
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
27 ATKINS
Klaatu!?
HER VOICE
No!
A long beat while he
waits.
We see her silhouette,
further off.
YOUNG
WOMAN
Klaata. Klaatus daughter.
He almost moves,
startled, but...
She is gone. The dunes
are empty.
He opens his eyes.
ATKINS
(whispers)
Klaata---
He looks down at:
Her footprints in the
sand, which, in a sudden gust of wind, blow away, are erased, gone!
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
28 In the
deep morning of Christmas, ATKINS drives home.
Stepping inside the
silent and sleeping house, he sees, atop the Christmas tree, the small and incredible
ornament that glows and pulses with a faint heartbeat of illumination.
CUT TO THE INTERIOR of
the Vehicle Assembly Building, where the vast spaceship dimly pulses with a similar beat
of light.
Inside the ship, as the
CAMERA moves in on the crystal enclosure where KLAATU death-sleeps, the light from the
ice-floe mass beats in a long slow pulse.
CUT TO: the interior of
the YOUNG WOMAN'S, KLAATA'S, room upstairs, as the CAMERA moves toward her bed where she
sleeps, her hair furled out on her pillow. By her bedside is a crystal cube, opaque,
in which the pulse of illumination is repeated again, so we connect it and the ornament
downstairs, AND the spacecraft, AND the crystal ice enclosure where KLAATU
lies dreaming or dreamless, in suspended animation.
ATKINS, coming upstairs,
sees the faint beat of light under KLAATA's door.
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SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
29 He
hesitates by KLAATAs door, reaches out, almost taps it, but the light under the
door, and the faint rabbit-run heartbeat that goes with it, stirs fitfully, as if
half-alarmed.
He pulls back, takes a
deep breath, and leaves.
His door shuts.
The pulse of light, the
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Interim
Sc: M Out
in the ruins of one of the old rocket pads at high noon, climbing to the top where they
can see the entire stretch of Canaveral's machineries for mile on mile, ATKINS finally
turns to KLAATA and asks the most important question.
ATKINS
You waited thirty years.
Why did you come back now?
KLAATA
We said we would.
ATKINS
You also said you'd
destroy
Earth if we didn't behave. We haven't behaved, have we?
What are you waiting for?
KLAATA turns, surveys the
scene, and the world beyond the Cape.
KLAATA
You've behaved better
than you think. That's why we delayed. You're strange people. You've actually done some
things right!
ATKINS
Like what?
KLAATA
Dont you know? Must
I, from
some other world tell you?
Thirty years ago people still
died from polio, malaria, scarlet fever. You've stopped all that. Your country invented
new kinds
of wheat and corn. You send food to 90 countries. Immigrants pour into your land, 500
thousand a year. Why are they coming here if you're as bad as you say?
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Interim
Sc: N ATKINS
I didn't say...
KLAATA
The tone of your voice
says for you. You don't like yourself, your world, your people. How peculiar that
I find much to defend. All this, that, there, didn't exist, thirty years ago. You've
reached the Moon. You've touched Mars and Jupiter and Saturn!
ATKINS
And stopped touching...
KLAATA
But you can do it again!
ATKINS
If I had my way...yes.
But Im only one person.
KLAATA
Ah, and so am I. But watch me!
There is no threat in her
voice, only wi11 and energy; much fervor, a great fire.
He turns to look at her
face.
ATKINS
So you're the teacher
Klaatu
told me to expect? You going
to teach them?
(nods
out at
the world)
The world doesnt
like teachers,
do-gooders.
KLAATA laughs.
KLAATA
But, you don't
understand. I'm here to do bad!
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THE EVENING OF THE
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Interim
Sc: O He
is stunned. She continues, amused, gesturing at the Christmas week landscape.
KLAATA
Oh, yes, I come now with
Christmas gifts, but to take away!
ATKINS
Take? Take!?
KLAATA searches the
horizon.
KLAATA
There, see? That oil
tanker. What if I took it and all the oil in the world away to celebrate New Year's?
ATKINS
You'd be dead by noon tomorrow!
KLAATA
You think so? Well!
She begins to move
rapidly down through the ironwork steps toward the ground, half-serious, half-laughing.
KLAATA
You think I'm joking? Come on!
She rushes down the metal
stairs. He can only follow, his face shadowed and disturbed.
She is waiting in the
car. He tries to start it. It wont function. He swears at it.
Then he thinks, looks
over at her. She nods.
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THE EVENING OF THE
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Interim
Sc: P KLAATA
It will start only when I tell it.
ATKINS
Tell it.
She touches her wrist
computer. The car guns and thunders its motor. They drive away.
They enter her room, in
which she hands him the glowing crystal cube from her night stand.
Its sound, its look, its
interior music is special, muted, strange. Its colors and lights play on his face.
ATKINS
Well...?
KLAATA
What if we uninvented all
the oil in the Middle East, in the world?
ATKINS
You can't uninvent
something that it took the Earth a billion years to make!
KLAATA
Allow me to convince you --
She touches her wrist
band. The crystal in his hand projects a Sun image on the ceiling, boiling with energies.
KLAATA
That was Earth's birthplace, yes?
ATKINS
We came out of the Sun, right.
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THE EVENING OF THE
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Interim
Sc: Q KLAATA
A11 of Earth, all the
elements, everything, was once in the Sun, correct?
ATKINS
Correct.
KLAATA
Only here, when the fire
cooled, did the elements separate, yes? This bit of fire became nitrogen, that flame
hydrogen, this oxygen... and these two combined - water. And all in pretty pictures we can
trace. Nothing we can't figure with pure light.
They watch the changing
colors of the solar disc on the ceiling as it becomes, one moment, pure hydrogen color, or
pure nitrogen, or combinations of iron and water that swarm and liquefy.
KLAATA
So if we can figure how
things are put together, all the things of Earth, list them one by one, analyze their
structure --
ATKINS
For instance?
She touches the computer
bracelet. The Sun goes out. She opens the night bureau drawer and takes out a packet of
needles.
KLAATA
Let's see what these are made of!
ATKINS
Needles--?
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THE EVENING OF THE
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Interim
Sc: R She
places the needles on top of the crystal cube. On the ceiling a prism pattern, a 'reading'
of the molecular structure of the metal needles 'prints out.'
KLAATA
There. That's what
needles are made of. And if we know how to make them, then we know how to--
ATKINS
--unmake them.
She nods, takes the cube
from his hand, puts it on the table. Touches her computer wristband and--
ATKINS
My God!
The needles disappear.
ATKINS stands stunned by
this.
ATKINS
Good trick...
KLAATA
You know its not.
ATKINS
Can you make all the
needles in the world disappear?
KLAATA
If we wished.
ATKINS
And the thimbles?
KLAATA
Thimbles, yes.
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THE EVENING OF THE
SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
Interim
Sc: S ATKINS
And the nails that hold
the pictures on the walls?
KLAATA
We could make a million
pictures fall.
ATKINS
And the nail files and
the scissors of the world?
KLAATA
The fingernails of the
world will be longer next year.
ATKINS
Why are you starting small?
KLAATA
Isn't it more interesting
to drop hints? Let the world know, bit by bit, doorknob by doorhinge by clothespin, that
it is the time of Indian Giving, the time of taking back, the time of Uninventing all the
inventions, large and small, in the history of Man?
ATKINS
God!
KLAATA
Oh, god, indeed.
KLAATA then explains in
some detail what their plan, her plan, KLAATU's plan, is. To let the panic grow in little
starts and stops, little vanishings, little disappearances, at first unnoticed. Who cares,
for instance, if a11 the tiddlewinks in the world vanish on the same day? Or all the
collar-stays? Or all the pennies which now burden us and are almost worthless?
Somewhere down the line
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EVENING OF THE SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
Interim
Sc: X
(4/9/81)
In the hours before
her final going-away, KLAATA gathers, perhaps by force, an assorted score of military and
world leaders. Delivered to Canaveral, packed into the space vehicle, they soar in what
seems a few instants, to New York and hover by the base of the Statue of Liberty.
ATKINS squints at KLAATA.
ATKINS
Is this the right direction?
KLAATA looks up along the
pointing arm of the Statue of Liberty.
KLAATA
No. That gives us our bearing.
She slams the controls.
KLAATA
Up!
And the ship soars,
shrieks, thrusts up along the length of the Statue, the reach of the mighty Arm and Torch,
and BANGS! into the stars!
Where, suspended over
Earth, KLAATA touches yet other computer tabs.
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THE EVENING OF THE
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Interim
Sc: Y
(4/9/81) And
the bottom side of the great Disc unshutters its eye, which is to say reveals itself as a
great viewing crystal around which the military and power elite circle. They gasp....
For the whole continent
of America, leaning into the shadow of night, can be seen below.
KLAATA touches a series
of buttons and:
Out beyond, in Space,
great platforms construct themselves.
The power elite, stunned,
watch as the--
Platforms fit jigsaw
within jigsaw, as pieces are brought up through the night heavens by Shuttle and by other
rocket vehicles and Astronauts scramble out to unfold the puzzle and slot it back together
into a mile long flat mirror surface which blinks and burns with SUNLIGHT!
While below, on Earth,
viewed on great screens placed within the Ship's interior, we can see vast receiving Cups
being welded into place, here, there, and around the whole continent.
While still more
platforms are built in Space, two or three thousand miles apart, circling the Earth.
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THE EVENING OF THE
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Interim
Sc: Z
(4/9/81) There
is a great hum and stir or excitement amongst the captive audience as--
KLAATA touches the final
buttons to finish the work and ATKINS says:
ATKINS
This can't be real!
KLAATA
(smiles)
It's not. Holograms,
three- dimensional projections of
things that could be. Images
of possible dreams. There.
She touches a last lever.
The great Solar Platforms
(for that is what they are) turn magnificently on their silent hinges.
And catch the Sun!
For they are high enough
above the Earth to get the slanted rays of the Sun beyond the night planet!
KLAATA
And here.... and now... here.
She touches the controls.
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THE EVENING OF THE
SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
Interim Sc: Z-1
(4/9/81) The
light beams flash down to Earth....
Are caught in the
receiving Cups!
KLAATA looks upon her
work and then says:
KLAATA
Now...let us light the
cities of the world.
She moves her hand ever a
territorial spread of continental land under her fingers, in miniature.
The audience gasps.
For below in the night
world, from New York, then on to Boston and Philadelphia, and across the country, city by
city, town by town, lights up!
In a great flare and
spread and flash of light, the entire American continent fires its town and city lights!
It is a magnificent
moment, at which all can only stare, frozen in awe.
KLAATA moves her hand.
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THE EVENING OF THE
SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
Interim Sc: Z-2
(4/9/81) The
Ship tilts and moves in Space.
The Platforms flash and
turn to drink more Sun!
And the cities of Europe
light themselves, one by one.
It is like a scene,
reversed, in which all the candles in a great hall or cathedral have been blown out, but
now, in a miraculous instant, relight themselves!
KLAATA lights all the
night side of Earth.
ATKINS speaks at last,
staring down.
ATKINS
Can we do that?
KLAATA looks from him to
the illuminated planet.
KLAATA
You know you can.
And when it's done, no more navies protecting oil-lines, no more shortages, no more
blackmail, no more need. Only light, forever, all night every night for ten thousand
years! Will you do it!?
She looks around at the
amazed assemblage of faces. The faces look to each other. ATKINS must answer for them all.
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THE EVENING OF THE
SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
Interim Sc: Z-3
(4/9/81) ATKINS
(quietly)
Damn...but we'll try.
KLAATA
You'd better.
She pauses and adds,
looking at everyone.
KLAATA
That's a threat.
She touches a button and:
The Space Platforms blink
out, fly apart; fragmented dreams.
The lights of the world
cease.
The faces staring down,
turn dark.
KLAATA gestures.
The ship lands back at
Canaveral.
And the dignitaries
disperse, looking at one another, murmuring, whispering.
ATKINS
(half to himself,
murmuring)
Good God in heaven
will
they do it?
KLAATA answers.
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THE EVENING OF THE
SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
Interim Sc: Z-4
(4/9/81) KLAATA
Now they're yours. I give
them back to you. Tend your sheep.
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THE EVENING OF THE
SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
Finale A It is evening near the Vehicle
Assembly Building at Cape Canaveral. It is, in fact, a few minutes before midnight on New
Year's Eve.
A car goes along the
deserted road on the edge of the sea. We hear fitful rises and falls of music:
"Should Old Acquaintance Be Forgot".....and a voice, with static, describing
Time Square...the crowds...five minutes until the New Year....
Inside the VAB, in the
immense darkness, KLAATA, the daughter of KLAATU, is ready to depart on the spacecraft.
Her one week, which began on Christmas Eve, is up. She moves through the vast church-like
silence with ATKINS, to stand near the spaceship.
She touches a large
relief-map chart-computer which stands in the shadow. A whole series of lights come on,
each by its own symbol of land, sea, air, problems, people.
He scans the board, the
lights.
ATKINS
Everything weve
done right, the last few years?
She nods.
He looks over at the dark
half of the board, with its unlit computer lights. He runs his hand over some tabs, but
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Finale B nothing lights.
ATKINS
Everything we've done wrong?
KLAATA
Or -- just things you
haven't done, or must do over.
ATKINS
It's a long list.
KLAATA
Neglected for a long time.
ATKINS tries again,
moving his hands over the tabs, to see the faintest pulsings of lights in the computer
layout.
ATKINS
And -- if we do all the
things--light all the lights? Do you ink-stamp the green brownie on the top of our paper,
give us the gold star?
KLAATA
More than that.
She reaches down and
brings up into the light, a cube of pure glowing illumination, roughly six inches by six
inches in dimension. There are slots on each side of the cube. She puts the cube on the
table near the layout. Beside it she fans out a series of blank computer cards which will
one day be printed with data.
ATKINS
Is that the last gift of the season?
She nods, quietly.
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THE EVENING OF THE
SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
Finale C KLAATA
Or the death of Mankind.
ATKINS
It doesn't look big enough for that.
KLAATA
Believe me, just as there
is death in life, so there is darkness in this light.
ATKINS
You're leaving that behind?
KLAATA
It wi11 stay here, it
will stay lit, for twenty years.
ATKINS
And when the light goes out?
KLAATA
(with meaning for
the whole world)
The light goes out.
He looks at the small and
innocent looking cube. The illumination plays on his face.
ATKINS
How do we keep it lit?
KLAATA
By doing all the things
that you must do. One by one, feed the data in, as you finish your tasks.
ATKINS
Youre asking us to
do everything at once!
KLAATA
But that has always
been the way, for life, on every world!
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THE EVENING OF THE
SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
Finale D ATKINS
And if we fail at just ONE job?
KLAATA
The light goes out.
He looks at the cube,
picks it up, hefts it.
ATKINS
The Big Bang?
She nods.
His face takes on a
semi-sly look.
KLAATA
No. Don't even think it.
You can't fool Gort.
ATKINS
Gort?!
KLAATA
That is his heart -- or
what passes for a heart -- that you hold in your hands. There is no way to tamper or pry
or change what you hold. And if you try to destroy it....
ATKINS
(finishes for her;
quietly)
The light will go out.
He holds the cube up and
stares at it.
ATKINS
And if we do ever thing
right and fine and true.
KLAATA
Then
She touches the wrist
computer on her left wrist. The great Gates of the VAB thunder wide.
KLAATA
The Universe is yours.
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THE EVENING OF THE
SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
Finale E They look out at:
The great wheeling round
of stars, waiting.
KLAATA
If you have done as you
say you will do, grown to fit your promise, given yourselves back to yourselves as
a gift, then place this cube, still lit, in your space machine. You wi11 travel faster
than Death can follow. This will take you to our world.
ATKINS
Where the angels of the
Lord will sing and dance and shout our welcome?
KLAATA
Where I will be waiting.
ATKINS
I must be on that ship,
then, mustn't I? And sixty years old.
KLAATA
When you live with us,
you'll be thirty again.
What time is it?
ATKINS
You know.
She smiles, nods, touches
her computer-wrist-band.
A small radio in the
corner of the VAB, in darkness, lights up. "AULD LANG SYNE" is still being sung,
faintly, crowds are shouting. There are exp1osions of fireworks. A voice cries: "It's
midnight." Other voices: "Happy New Year!"
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THE EVENING OF THE
SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
Finale F KLAATA
Listen. Your peop1e
believe in the future more than YOU do!
He listens. The mob is in
full happy tumult now. "Happy, Happy...Happy New Year..."
KLAATA
Now...
She turns, waits.
ATKINS looks at the
waiting spacecraft, cannot say it. She glances at him. This nerves him at last to say:
ATKINS
Klaatu barada nikto....
The ship hums, begins to
glow. Its invisible seal splits to reveal its interior. The steps slide down.
He takes her hands,
kisses her quietly.
ATKINS
Twenty years!
She sums it up very
simply, quietly, philosophically.
KLAATA
Tomorrow morning.
She goes up the steps,
does not look back. The seam hisses shut.
The radio is still
playing and the voices singing and calling the New Year as
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THE EVENING OF THE
SECOND DAY / Ray Bradbury
Finale G KLAATA's spacecraft takes off and
flies up.
From his view, we see the
ship going away.
In REVERSE, we look back
as, the Christmas Tree behind him blinks and flickers on, as we pull away, and leave the
tree, and ATKINS holding the bright cube, looking up.
In a series of reversals,
the craft flies high, looking back, or, from below, we see it going away and away into the
stars.
He stands holding the
bright cube, the 'heart of Gort' as it has been said, which hums and pulses in his hands.
ATKINS
(quietly, to the sky)
Happy....
The echoes finish it from
the radio, and the cathedral dark around him: New Year, New Year, New Year.
We fly away from
CANAVERAL leaving it far away below, where we can still see two points of light, the
glowing cube, and the small tree.
The spacecraft merges
into the stars. MUSIC UP. ROLL THE CREDITS.
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